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Vocab2-Phaethon by ~Annibal:iconAnnibal:





The moon was rising, a siren from the deep, her light shimmering with terpsichorean lucidity, glimmering and vacillating through the sky, calling out the creatures that flourished in the darkness of the night. However, on this night they stayed in hiding, giving the land a Plutonian aura, a deserted and grim shadow that enshrouded all. A silence, all encompassing and arcane, a silence that connotated a deep seeded dread had crept up on the lands like a gorgon disguised, enmasked as peace or tranquility.

Phäethon was slinking through the old, Stygian, murky wood, the gloom of the land prevalent on his mind, terror clenching his heart in an iron grip, barely letting it beat, and icing his mind until he was physically trembling, quaking in fear. He knew it wasn’t safe that night, that They were out, and hunting, but he also knew that if he didn’t find his clan, his pack, he’d be as good as dead and his Homeric quest would cease, like his heart, like his soul. And if he did not succeed…well, that would result in the destruction of perhaps all that lived on that insignificant world.

At first, to Phäethon, that notion had seemed preposterous, at the least, and now it seemed rather thespian, all too melodramatic to be true, but the farther they went and closer they got that doubt began to evolve into absolute belief in the dilemma’s verity. Instead of cravenly avoiding the upcoming battle for the planet against Them somewhere to the South, Phäethon had decided to join up with a small but Promethean group of warriors bent on overcoming the enemy, the nemesis, and they had, though hesitantly, allowed him to come along with them.

They let him tag along with trepidation because they hadn’t thought that he’d be any help to them, as they were all Argonauts, strong, powerful, brave, with a pension for adventure, and he was young and short, scrawny, completely juxtaposed, out of place…though he knew this was his place. And that was probably why, when the pack was attacked the night before, and he’d been separated from the rest in the ensuing fight, they had left him for dead at the mercy of the ragged, vicious harpy. But, in an amazing (if he did say so himself) display of antaean prowess, he slaughtered the iniquitous creature and began to track his deserters. This little myrmidon was not going to be left behind, Phäethon decided, and now he believed he was close to catching up.

The boy halted behind an old, moss covered tree as a calliopean melody lilted through the forest and shattered the silence. He recognized it as Their voices, the voices of evil, lulling and deceitful, paean and inspiring to those who knew not of its utterer, of their malevolence, of their demonic nature and eidolic ability to destroy this world and travel through their phantasmagory with ease.

Phäethon froze—the song drew near—grew in intensity, as did his pulse, until he could hear the clicking of its talons, the gnashing of its teeth, could smell the stench of death—and he could sense the pure, unadulterated evil of its halo. He gripped his knife in his sweat coated hand, and slid down the bark of the tree into a disheartened crouch—ready to defend himself in what he knew would be an exercise in futility—when, through the trees, the moon shown with a shaft of pure light, and the oracular call of his pack sounded.
©2005-2009 ~Annibal
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Author's Comments

Note that there is that nifty accent over the "a", but I dunno how to do that internet style, or it just wont let me, so....Yup, another one. 20 sentences of sillyiness! Well, I never really write silly things....'cept that time i wrote about a cheese curd taking over the world, but that was different. Where was I? oh yeah! This is more of an anecdote of a larger story than an actual short story, so bear in mind that it is rather vague and nonspecific (hooray, redundancy!). Um...perhaps I'll expand on it sometime, but meh. I dunno. i get to go shopping now!

Note: Phaethon, in greek or roman mythology (can't remember which) was the son of the sun (:D!), and he was human. On time he tried to ride in his father's carriage across the sky, but he died. 'Cause for some reason humans can't get to close to extreme heat without getting seriously hurt. Go figure. So, in my mind, it worked because in the myth Phaethon tried, but failed, and in my story Phaethon is trying...and he'll probably fail because for some reason all of my characters die horribly. I don't know what happens, they just do. Wow, I ramble.

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:iconaudley:
You have a real gift for description - it's unusual but it isn't over-the-top at all. I could really picture the Moon from the way you described it - it's brilliant : )

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I was cured all right.
:iconeanh:
A pension for adventure ?
Passion, might it not be ?

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Love y'all.
:iconhokuto:
o.o Damn, that's creepy - a bit Lovecraftian almost, especially with all the vocab. XD Very nice use of classical references, and the shading in the preview pic is fantabulous. :heart:

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I used pension because they aren't at all seeking adventure the way, say, a mountain man or a Disney hero would, but, rather, they're like pirates or vikings, and it's just what they do.

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"...Just getting through the day without killing somebody can be an achievement." - Jane, "Children of the Mind", OrsonScott Card

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:iconalbalannae:
Wow! Better than I expected, and you made me want to see more! :-( you should write it... <__< :XD: I like the drawing as well, the creature in the background looks pretty damn cool! But for now, I must go and look up some of the words you used... >___> ^^ great job! :+favlove:

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My tale is the most bitter truth: Time pays us
with but earth and dust and a dark, silent grave.
Remember my child:
Without innocence, the cross is only iron;
hope is only an illusion
and Oceansouls; nothing but a name...
<3 :Iconfruitsbasket:
:iconannibal:
XD! Maybe I will! I dunno, I'm writing a plethera of stories right now...urg! Yay, thanks! I'm glad you like the preview, as it was kicking my ass quite admirably! Hehe, those are some of the worst words we had...:glomp:

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"...Just getting through the day without killing somebody can be an achievement." - Jane, "Children of the Mind", OrsonScott Card

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:D! Thanks! :glomp:! Would that be H. P. Lovecraft? I'm not familiar with his (her?) stuff. Are they good? Should I read 'em? eh? EH?! Yeah, me stoopid. :boogie:

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"...Just getting through the day without killing somebody can be an achievement." - Jane, "Children of the Mind", OrsonScott Card

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:iconannibal:
Wow, what a compliment! That's one of the nicest things anyone's said about my writing ;___;! Mostly because you said why you like it...thank you! :glomp:! You really made me :boogie:!

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"...Just getting through the day without killing somebody can be an achievement." - Jane, "Children of the Mind", OrsonScott Card

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:iconhokuto:
Yeah, Lovecraft is certainly interesting and worth a read or two. XD

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